I think about this game a lot, years later. "A Host of Gentle Terrors" and "A Moth Batters Against Glass" make a excellent duology, and I love the worldbuilding and sense of exploration when wandering. Fantastic game!
so, wait, to be clear, did you download the html file? are you using, like, an itch program or something rather than just directly downloading it? that might cause problems...
I assume this is cause you're using Brave, which seems pretty restrictive of functionality that Twine needs to operate. security is antithetical to the Deplotted Lands I guess.
So, uh, hopefully this is the right place for this.
I seem to be getting an error in the cave area.
Here's the error message:
and here were the contents of my inventory:
I think it may be the viscerturgy book that caused the problem, but I'm not sure. I went through the caves before without it and had no problems. But once I got it, I started getting a lot more flavor text, but also this error every couple screens. I discarded the book to test this and kept getting the error, but then I remembered you still keep some knowledge even after you discard a book. So I'm still not 100% certain what's causing it, exactly.
Holy crap that's a lot of items! How long have you been playing? o_o
I gotta make writs of passage a little less common... that frequency doesn't really fit the flavor.
Anyway it's not a viscerturgy book problem, turns out, though that was a pretty good guess. It's an "I stupidly forgot to add a line of code to the non-bug-test version of the slime cave card" problem. And yes I'm aware there's some irony in the fact that my bug testing efforts so far have CAUSED all the bugs in the final release version--story-breaking bugs no less. Still, it's kind of heartening to hear that you liked the game so much despite major storylines being unplayable!
I want to fix a few other minor problems before harassing everyone with another bug fix, but an update with a fully playable slime storyline should be out in the next few days. Thanks so much for letting me know this was broken!
Hm...I think that was about 2-3 hours, maybe, spread out over the evening. (I know it's not that meaningful in this game, but I get antsy over the idea of losing all my items and "progress", so I just kept the same game open in another tab and hopped in and out of it instead of starting a new one. Alas, old packrat RPG habits die hard. Also, I got more story detail the more tapestry fragments I collected, so now I'm paranoid and wonder if I'll unlock the Super Secret Ending if I collect like 200 mosaic tiles or something.)
Anyways, looking forward to the update! I'm quite interested in meeting this "slime mummy" character you mentioned...
Designing this game has been such an interesting case study in how hard it is to discourage RPG habits without totally hamstringing the design space. Like the tapestry fragments encourage something they're not really MEANT to but I also wouldn't want to lose what they do narratively so ????
You definitely don't have to collect 200 mosaic tiles to get the Super Secret Ending though, haha.
I may just add an autosave feature to a future patch, since so many people seem to be playing this for... well, much longer stretches than I really expected!
Hm...yeah that is a bit of a conundrum. I think people tend to assume patterns more often than not, so if there's one item that gives you more detail the more of them you collect, the player will assume there must be more. But since there's no way to tell from just looking at one of the item (or even multiples, neccessarily), and you don't want to miss out on any of the storylines, that paranoia just spreads to everything and leads to item hunting. (or it sorta did for me, anyway.)
So it might just be as simple as marking the items that you need multiples of? Not something as grotesquely obvious as a "1/20 TAPESTRY FRAGMENTS COLLECTED", obviously, but maybe just something subtle like a key phrase ("You wonder if there is something more to these...") or taking them to another screen when they examine the pieces. Then, as long as there are at least two examples, the player will be able to draw the connection and go "ah, ok, so that's how this works" and be reassured that they're not missing out by not hoarding 40 Slime-Covered Notes.
Granted, that does sort of gamify the experience in ways that aren't ideal, but I think that might just be unavoidable for any instance of "collect X objects to unlock Y story"? So it might be better to make that small sacrifice and confine it to an identifiable set of objects, rather than let that sort of item-paranoia leak out all over everything.
IDK, I'm just rambling now. You almost certainly know better than I do here.
No these are really interesting thoughts! And very similar to thoughts I've had myself about other mechanics.
Basically a lot of this design has been sort of trying furiously to swim against the whirlpool of typical game design, because like if you treat it like an RPG I think it gets pretty horribly frustrating? There's no way of grinding items, there's no kind of obvious predictable order to when certain things appear... and all that's intentional, but if any mechanic accidentally flips the behavioral switch in everyone's head now that says "I need to grind and hoard and grind some more because that's what you do in games" the whole house of cards kind of...
wait, I've mixed like three metaphors there, haven't I?
Whatever, the point is that like I tried aggressively to avoid gamifying this in the typical ways but part of that involves integrating in some of the useful design space that grindy games can offer while still finding ways to signal, as you suggest, that this is a kind of exception.
Actually, the jump to another screen might be the solution here, since it loops the tapestries in with the mask and the root, taking advantage of those existing mechanics...
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I think about this game a lot, years later. "A Host of Gentle Terrors" and "A Moth Batters Against Glass" make a excellent duology, and I love the worldbuilding and sense of exploration when wandering. Fantastic game!
It won't launch
It should just open in a browser... Is your system set up to launch html files in a browser? It's a Twine so it's basically a webpage...
so, wait, to be clear, did you download the html file? are you using, like, an itch program or something rather than just directly downloading it? that might cause problems...
Yes. This is what happens when I open the html file
looks like you've got an issue with your permissions in your browser, they're not letting twine set up the save state. see here: https://www.chromium.org/for-testers/bug-reporting-guidelines/uncaught-securityerror-failed-to-read-the-localstorage-property-from-window-access-is-denied-for-this-document
I assume this is cause you're using Brave, which seems pretty restrictive of functionality that Twine needs to operate. security is antithetical to the Deplotted Lands I guess.
So, uh, hopefully this is the right place for this.
I seem to be getting an error in the cave area.
Here's the error message:
and here were the contents of my inventory:
I think it may be the viscerturgy book that caused the problem, but I'm not sure. I went through the caves before without it and had no problems. But once I got it, I started getting a lot more flavor text, but also this error every couple screens. I discarded the book to test this and kept getting the error, but then I remembered you still keep some knowledge even after you discard a book. So I'm still not 100% certain what's causing it, exactly.
Really amazing game otherwise, though!
Holy crap that's a lot of items! How long have you been playing? o_o
I gotta make writs of passage a little less common... that frequency doesn't really fit the flavor.
Anyway it's not a viscerturgy book problem, turns out, though that was a pretty good guess. It's an "I stupidly forgot to add a line of code to the non-bug-test version of the slime cave card" problem. And yes I'm aware there's some irony in the fact that my bug testing efforts so far have CAUSED all the bugs in the final release version--story-breaking bugs no less. Still, it's kind of heartening to hear that you liked the game so much despite major storylines being unplayable!
I want to fix a few other minor problems before harassing everyone with another bug fix, but an update with a fully playable slime storyline should be out in the next few days. Thanks so much for letting me know this was broken!
Hm...I think that was about 2-3 hours, maybe, spread out over the evening. (I know it's not that meaningful in this game, but I get antsy over the idea of losing all my items and "progress", so I just kept the same game open in another tab and hopped in and out of it instead of starting a new one. Alas, old packrat RPG habits die hard. Also, I got more story detail the more tapestry fragments I collected, so now I'm paranoid and wonder if I'll unlock the Super Secret Ending if I collect like 200 mosaic tiles or something.)
Anyways, looking forward to the update! I'm quite interested in meeting this "slime mummy" character you mentioned...
Designing this game has been such an interesting case study in how hard it is to discourage RPG habits without totally hamstringing the design space. Like the tapestry fragments encourage something they're not really MEANT to but I also wouldn't want to lose what they do narratively so ????
You definitely don't have to collect 200 mosaic tiles to get the Super Secret Ending though, haha.
I may just add an autosave feature to a future patch, since so many people seem to be playing this for... well, much longer stretches than I really expected!
Hm...yeah that is a bit of a conundrum. I think people tend to assume patterns more often than not, so if there's one item that gives you more detail the more of them you collect, the player will assume there must be more. But since there's no way to tell from just looking at one of the item (or even multiples, neccessarily), and you don't want to miss out on any of the storylines, that paranoia just spreads to everything and leads to item hunting. (or it sorta did for me, anyway.)
So it might just be as simple as marking the items that you need multiples of? Not something as grotesquely obvious as a "1/20 TAPESTRY FRAGMENTS COLLECTED", obviously, but maybe just something subtle like a key phrase ("You wonder if there is something more to these...") or taking them to another screen when they examine the pieces. Then, as long as there are at least two examples, the player will be able to draw the connection and go "ah, ok, so that's how this works" and be reassured that they're not missing out by not hoarding 40 Slime-Covered Notes.
Granted, that does sort of gamify the experience in ways that aren't ideal, but I think that might just be unavoidable for any instance of "collect X objects to unlock Y story"? So it might be better to make that small sacrifice and confine it to an identifiable set of objects, rather than let that sort of item-paranoia leak out all over everything.
IDK, I'm just rambling now. You almost certainly know better than I do here.
No these are really interesting thoughts! And very similar to thoughts I've had myself about other mechanics.
Basically a lot of this design has been sort of trying furiously to swim against the whirlpool of typical game design, because like if you treat it like an RPG I think it gets pretty horribly frustrating? There's no way of grinding items, there's no kind of obvious predictable order to when certain things appear... and all that's intentional, but if any mechanic accidentally flips the behavioral switch in everyone's head now that says "I need to grind and hoard and grind some more because that's what you do in games" the whole house of cards kind of...
wait, I've mixed like three metaphors there, haven't I?
Whatever, the point is that like I tried aggressively to avoid gamifying this in the typical ways but part of that involves integrating in some of the useful design space that grindy games can offer while still finding ways to signal, as you suggest, that this is a kind of exception.
Actually, the jump to another screen might be the solution here, since it loops the tapestries in with the mask and the root, taking advantage of those existing mechanics...
I may give that a try! :D